Disappointing

I dont really write reviews that often, but I just wanted to say that I found the mistakes and poor writing distracting. Its such a shame, because the concept could be truly great. I just wish the author had given this to an editor or just had someone read it, I couldnt even finish it. And another thing! Why the heck is it $1.99?! I spent 2 dollars on an unreadable story...

Grace244 about Sword of the Elements